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20210724雅思寫作范文分享:現代人變得更依賴還是更獨立?

作者: 2021-07-26 16:44 來源:重慶編輯
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Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that people are becoming more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

寫作思路

現代人變得更依賴還是更獨立,這個問題可以從不同的角度來看。現代社會分工越來越細,每個人都需要依賴其他人的勞動成果才能生存;在公司里面,有不同的部門,同事之間需要密切合作,才能完成工作任務,所以從這個角度來看,人們確實變得更加相互依賴。如果從生活角度來看,人們似乎越來越獨立,互聯網使得人們不用再求助鄰居朋友,也減少了面對面交流。更多的人選擇小家庭或者獨自居住,對于家人的依賴也越來越少。

 

重點詞匯與語料

interdependent 互相依賴

labor division 勞動分工

specialize in 專注于

key element 要素

consist of 組成

complicated 復雜的

a strong awareness 強烈的意識

extended family 大家庭

network age 網絡時代

solitary 孤僻的

in a sense 在某種意義上

advent 出現

contribute to 有助于

 

 

參考范文

It is said that we are now living in an increasingly interdependent world, but on the other hand, more and more people appear to be independent in their lives.    

 

Obviously, labor division is becoming highly advanced in the modern world, with everyone specializing in a certain field. It is impossible for a person to produce all necessities in his life by himself and he has to buy goods in the market, which means he needs to depend on the work of other people. In addition, cooperation has become a key element in our daily work. When a company consists of dozens of departments and a project becomes huge and complicated, it is hard to imagine that one person can finish his task without cooperating with his colleagues.       

 

On the other hand, it is interesting to note that people today have a strong awareness of independence, which is particularly shown in their private lives. For example, many young people are reluctant to live with their parents, as they did in traditional extended families. Instead, they establish small families and some choose to live alone. Another example is that, in this network age, increasingly numbers of people become solitary, with less face-to-face communication in life. They can get answers to almost all questions by searching on the web, or get things done with the help of various Apps, not relying on neighbors and friends any more. So, in a sense, the advent of the Internet has contributed to their independent lifestyles.                           

 

Overall, I am of the opinion that individuals cannot live without communication and cooperation with others. As the economy develops, our work and lives are closely linked with others’ contribution to society. But it is also true that people have more independence in their personal choices.   

 

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